Aug
27
2008
This site provides writing advice and superhero comedy. If you're writing a superhero story, you will probably find our superhero-themed articles especially instructive.
Would you like to subscribe to our RSS feed?
Cadet Davis reviews and revises the titles of 30 manuscripts submitted to a writing workshop. This will help you evaluate and improve your titles.
Continue Reading »
Aug
08
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
Continue Reading »
Aug
05
2008
Mary Sues are characters that are self-insertions of the author. This article will help you identify and correct Mary Sues.
Continue Reading »
Aug
01
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
Continue Reading »
Jul
22
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
Continue Reading »
Jul
21
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
Continue Reading »
Jul
17
2008
Cadet Davis reviews another 40 titles of manuscripts submitted to an online workshop. This will help you determine whether your title is effective and how you might rewrite it.
Awesome
- The Merchant of Venison. This title does a remarkably good job of identifying the story as a Shakespeare parody. Also, it was the only title this week to get me to chuckle.
Above Average
- Dogs in Clogs. This was a real head-scratcher and failed to foreshadow the plot in any meaningful way, but was invitingly weird.
- Creeping Death. It foreshadows the story and tone well. If I were rewriting it, I’d make it more subtle and less cliché.
Continue Reading »
Jul
10
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
You can read the first three articles in this series here, here and here.
Continue Reading »
Jul
09
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
You can read the first three articles in this series here, here and here.
Continue Reading »
Jul
03
2008
Like The Fantasy Novelist’s Exam, we’ve written a list of questions to help you identify problems with your writing. Continue Reading »
Jul
03
2008
Sword-and-spell fantasy is a genre that attracts many prospective writers, which is good. Unfortunately, many of those authors are unpolished. Fortunately, there is an author’s test that will help fantasy authors diagnose some of the most common problems in their book. I find the following list of plot elements particularly useful:
Continue Reading »
Jul
01
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to reject a manuscript.
You can read the first three articles in this series here, here and here.
Continue Reading »
Jun
28
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
You can see the first two articles in this series here and here.
Continue Reading »
Jun
26
2008
This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
This article is a sequel to “Five Mistakes of First-Time Novelists,” which you can read here.
Continue Reading »
Jun
25
2008
This short article will help beginning novel-writers avoid five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.
Continue Reading »