Archive for the 'Common Mistakes of First Time Authors' Category

Aug 27 2008

Your Title is Bad, But You Can Fix It (Part 7)

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Cadet Davis reviews and revises the titles of 30 manuscripts submitted to a writing workshop. This will help you evaluate and improve your titles.

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Aug 08 2008

Five More Mistakes First-Time Novelists Make (#46-50)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

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Aug 05 2008

Problem Characters: Mary Sues

Mary Sues are characters that are self-insertions of the author. This article will help you identify and correct Mary Sues.

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Aug 01 2008

Five More Mistakes First-Time Novelists Make (#41-45)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

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Jul 22 2008

Five More Mistakes of First-Time Authors (#36-40)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

 

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Jul 21 2008

Five More Mistakes of First-Time Authors (#31-35)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

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Jul 17 2008

Your Title is Bad, but You Can Fix It (Part 2)

Cadet Davis reviews another 40 titles of manuscripts submitted to an online workshop. This will help you determine whether your title is effective and how you might rewrite it.

Awesome

  1. The Merchant of Venison. This title does a remarkably good job of identifying the story as a Shakespeare parody. Also, it was the only title this week to get me to chuckle.

Above Average

  1. Dogs in Clogs. This was a real head-scratcher and failed to foreshadow the plot in any meaningful way, but was invitingly weird.
  2. Creeping Death. It foreshadows the story and tone well. If I were rewriting it, I’d make it more subtle and less cliché.

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Jul 10 2008

Five More Mistakes of First-Time Authors (#26-30)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

You can read the first three articles in this series here, here and here.

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Jul 09 2008

Five More Mistakes of First-Time Authors (#21-25)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

You can read the first three articles in this series here, here and here.

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Jul 03 2008

Superhero Nation’s Exam for Novelists

Like The Fantasy Novelist’s Exam, we’ve written a list of questions to help you identify problems with your writing. Continue Reading »

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Jul 03 2008

A funny but useful reality check for sword-and-spell fantasy authors

Sword-and-spell fantasy is a genre that attracts many prospective writers, which is good.  Unfortunately, many of those authors are unpolished.  Fortunately, there is an author’s test that will help fantasy authors diagnose some of the most common problems in their book.  I find the following list of plot elements particularly useful:

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Jul 01 2008

Five More Common Mistakes of First-Time Authors (#16-20)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to reject a manuscript.

You can read the first three articles in this series here, here and here.

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Jun 28 2008

Five More Mistakes of First-Time Novelists (#11-15)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

You can see the first two articles in this series here and here.

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Jun 26 2008

5 More Mistakes of First-Time Novelists (#6-10)

This short article will help beginning novelists avoid another five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

This article is a sequel to “Five Mistakes of First-Time Novelists,” which you can read here.

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Jun 25 2008

5 Common Mistakes for First-Time Novelists

This short article will help beginning novel-writers avoid five common mistakes that will usually cause publishers to throw out a manuscript.

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