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Apr 26 2009

Several problems with persecuted heroes

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When a hero runs into an obstacle, there is usually one of two reasons: 1) what he has done and 2) who he is.  Persecuted heroes, like the X-Men, face major obstacles because of who they are.  Here are a few problems with persecuted heroes.

1.  Persecution usually makes stories more grim and less fun.  This could be problematic.  People usually read fiction because they want to have fun.  Is there some other reason people will want to read your work?

2.  Being persecuted may compromise the hero’s likability.  Even though the persecution is probably beyond his control, being persecuted will probably cast a cloud of angst over him.  In particular, the hero will become very unlikable if he comes off whiny or starts moping.

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Apr 26 2009

Plot Elements That Should Not Be Added Lightly

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Here are several plot elements that will really affect the target audience and/or mood of your story.  Please do not include these elements unless they are so important to the work that you’d feel comfortable mentioning them on the back-cover.

 

1.  Please do not include rape or drug use unless you want to sell the work as very dark, gritty and/or dystopian. These elements are extremely mature and will probably have an enormous effect on the mood of the work as a whole.

 

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