Jan 24 2009
Archive for January 24th, 2009
Jan 24 2009
Your Title is Bad, But You Can Fix It (Part 10)
Cadet Davis reviews and revises the titles of 30 manuscripts submitted to a writing workshop. This will help you evaluate and improve your titles.
Jan 24 2009
Please be careful with the phrase “Then he remembered…”
“Then she remembered…” is usually an awkward way to remind readers of backstory. Additionally, it creates sentences that depend on a boring verb (remembered). For example, let’s say John is investigating a murder that may have been committed by his friend Cathy.
Cathy said that she had been on a safari when the victim was murdered. Then John remembered that she was actually deathly afraid of large animals.