Next week, I’m off to a wedding. I’m very excited, but I’ll be away from my computer for 4-5 days. Over that time, I’d like to run some articles written by our guests here. If you have any writing advice you’d like to share, please write up a sample post up to 500 words and send it to me at superheronation-at-gmail-dot-com. Thanks for your help.
After the first issue, comic books often include a page-long recap so that new readers can figure out what’s going on and who’s who. Here are a few tips.
1. Make your recap stylish and inviting. It needs to convince a prospective reader that this series is worth his time. Ideally, it will interest him so much that he goes back to look for the old issues he missed. The most effective recaps tend to be funny. Failing that, at least make it easy to follow and exciting. If it feels like the backstory is hard to follow, readers are probably going to put the book down.
2. You can make the recap feel fresher by doing something that fits into your story. For example, most of the characters in Superhero Nation work for the Human Resources department of a top-secret agency. So we do our recaps as personnel files and mission debriefings written by the head of Human Resources, who is a bit crazy.
For example, the main character’s “file” might contain blurbs like these.
Superpowers? None known. We’ve ruled out intelligence and usefulness.
Main contributions to team? Could be used as a battering ram.
That’ll help remind readers that he’s the guy without superpowers and that his co-workers regard him as useless. Just as importantly, we want to show to prospective readers that this series is witty and comical.
3. Make us feel the appropriate emotions. If your series is a horror, the blurb should feel eerie and chilling. If your writing is supposed to be remotely funny, make us laugh. If it’s a romance, focus on why we should care about the characters and their relationships. Etc.
Joel Schumacher is a director best-known for his vicious crimes against Batman, including putting nipples on the batsuit. Earlier today, I was browsing through TV Tropes and found that one of the Batman cartoons had a hilarious scene mocking Schumacher. (The idiot in the scene is named Joel and is standing in front of a sign that says Shoemaker).
The Batman was terrible. If you’re mainly watching this for comedic potential, I’d get as many Spanish-speakers or gringos as you can find, and let’s learn about the difference between “el” and “la” with Batman. –There’s a spectacularly strange scene where Batman tries interrogating Riddler and Riddler bursts into a soprano rendition of Ave Maria. […]
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1:30 – 6:55: Cyborg sees his Mother Box acting up. Then Mera sees her Mother box acting up. Then Amazon guards see their Mother Box acting up. Also there’s a Lex Luthor flashback where the computer shows him that Mother Boxes are plot relevant in case you missed that. PS: In the first 8 minutes […]
–Wonder Woman 1984 is not nearly as good at the original. Pluses: the cast is still very charming, and a few of the fight scenes are effective. I did actually like most of the first hour of the movie. –Setting: In the original Wonder Woman, the WWI setting contributes to a hard bleakness which effectively […]
1. I don’t know where to start with Captain Marvel. So many things went so wildly wrong that we’d need a presidential commission to get to the bottom of it. It’s like the Chernobyl of superhero movies. 2. If at any point you feel like your action movie would benefit from a character whose main […]
1. This version of Spider-Man is a useless toolbox who actively avoids doing interesting things, and what he does attempt is usually wimpy and/or incompetent. 2. Unlike most main characters, his choices don’t matter much. For example, he chooses to leave his supersuit at home (but his aunt sneaks it in anyway) and he tries […]
We’re up to 72 superhero movies since 2000 (current as of November 2017). You can download the full data here. Some observations: R movies are making up the quality gap with PG-13 movies. Superhero movies are improving. Over the last 5 years (2013-2017), the average superhero movie is averaging 70% on Rotten Tomatoes, up […]