Aug 21 2011
Editing Errors in Twilight
I saw that quite a few Twilight reviews mentioned the poor editing, so I spent 20 minutes double-checking whether the alleged editing mistakes were disputable and/or justifiable by artistic license. So far, I’m up to eight errors that I consider indisputable and another that might be merely awkward. I can’t remember reading any other professionally published novels with more than one typo.
Incorrect Word Choices and Tenses
1. Eclipse mixes up “whose” and “who’s.”
2. Twilight mixes up “moats” and “motes.”