Oct 01 2009
Thablue’s Review Forum
Please see the comments below. Thanks!
Oct 01 2009
Please see the comments below. Thanks!
Oct 01 2009
I’ve created eleven heroes with their own superpowers. But what’s a superhero without a weakness? Any suggestions for weaknesses to go with the following would be awesome: telekinesis, photokinesis and vitakinesis, chlorokinesis, shapeshifting, teleportation, aerokinesis , duplication, invisibility and phasing, geokinesis, force fields and energy blasts, and pyrokinesis. Thanks!
Oct 01 2009
Synopses that are just a sentence or two long are intensely useful because 1) they’re often required as part of the query process and 2) they convey a lot of information in very little time. The editor or agent reading your manuscript has a thousand other manuscripts in his pile and you have maybe a minute or two to impress him before he tosses you. The synopsis is your best opportunity to do so.
Here are a few tips about how to write an extremely short synopsis.
1. It’s usually more effective to refer to characters by their profession and/or key traits rather than by name. Calling him a “neurotic detective” tells us more about the character than calling him Adrian Monk. Unless the name adds something critical, I’d recommend leaving it out. (For example, if you’re writing about a real person, you obviously need to name him).
Oct 01 2009
That question usually sets off a rambling and unappealing description of the novel or comic book. As part of your query, you need to describe your book in 1-2 sentences (I’d recommend 10-30 words). New authors often have a great deal of trouble doing so– they’re so intimately familiar with all the details of their work that it’s hard to see what the big picture is.
As a writing exercise, I’d like you to boil down a lengthy work into 1-2 sentences. That’s not easy. It forces you to make tough decisions about what is absolutely essential to the core of your novel or comic book. It also provides you an response when someone asks you what your book is about. Having a simple, elegant introduction available is crucial.
Here’s an easy way to write a two-sentence synopsis.