Dec 30 2008

The end is nigh!

Published by B. Mac at 3:40 pm under Art

Hello, I'm an assistant editor providing writing advice. SN specializes in superhero writing advice, obviously, but most of the advice here applies to fantasy and sci-fi as well.

We have page 2 fully colored.  What do you think?  (The main thing from page 1 is that we know someone’s trying to kill the protagonist here).

The rest of our query will include 4 more colored pages, the script for the rest of the first issue, the cover for the first issue, the synopsis for the series, and the query letter.  I think the main obstacle at this point is the cover.

5 responses so far

5 Responses to “The end is nigh!”

  1. # Ragged Boyon 30 Dec 2008 at 5:27 pm

    LOOK, that guy is wearing orange and purple. My favorite combination. YAY!!!

    I like the sign “TAX MAN” on his car, he wears a title that most people despise, proudly.

  2. # The ReTARDISed Whovianon 30 Dec 2008 at 5:36 pm

    His car probably got keyed a lot. Before it exploded in a giant fireball, of course. Haha.

  3. # Megson 30 Dec 2008 at 7:16 pm

    Aww…poor kitty in the corner! He looks terrified.

  4. # B. Macon 01 Jan 2009 at 12:56 pm

    I love the kitten. It’s such a cute touch and helps establish an offbeat tone on a page that might otherwise be too gritty and bleak. If readers aren’t at least chuckling when they read this page, I think we’ve failed.

  5. # The Paulon 28 Jan 2009 at 10:00 am

    I like this! The lines are nice and the coloring is perfect. And if this is the second page, it makes me want to go to the third and onward.

    I really cannot wait to see the finished product.

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