Oct 23 2012
I think it looks okay, but I’m a bit alarmed by how unmemorable Stark sounded. The romance sounded corny. The villain/main conflict was probably the most promising angle.
In terms of developing a character in a darker direction, I would recommend checking out this trailer from Girl with the Dragon Tattoo:
I think Casino Royale also has some interesting character development (e.g. the contrast between Bond the cold killer and his concern for Moneypenny).