Aug 30 2008

Please let me know what you think of this webcomic revision

Published by J. Mallow at 1:58 pm under Webcomic

I’ve revised the first edition of our webcomic.  What do you think?

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In case you’d like to see the old version of this comic, please look below the jump.

And this is the old version…

What do you think?  Did I lose anything by taking out the “except for making them feel totally inadequate” joke?

4 responses so far

4 Responses to “Please let me know what you think of this webcomic revision”

  1. # Vitarieon 26 Jan 2009 at 9:12 pm

    I love the story!!!! It made me giggle!! I prefer the second, the revision is definitely better. PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!

  2. # B. Macon 26 Jan 2009 at 9:23 pm

    Thanks. We have 25 issues; you can see them here. (The link was broken, but I fixed it).

  3. # Ragged Boyon 27 Jan 2009 at 5:06 am

    I definitely like the revision better.

  4. # Ragged Boyon 27 Jan 2009 at 5:07 am

    I like most that you’ve pulled them back and allowed more room for the text, the page doesn’t looking so cramped now.

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