Aug 22 2009

Update of Webcomic #8

Published by at 2:59 pm under Webcomic

You can see the before-and-after below. What do you think?

BEFORE


AFTER


What do you think?

5 responses so far

5 Responses to “Update of Webcomic #8”

  1. Luna Jamniaon 22 Aug 2009 at 5:27 pm

    I actually like the first one better, just because it looks more cartoony/like a comic and the words are darker. But that’s just me, and I don’t read a lot of comics so I don’t know much.

  2. Hamon 23 Aug 2009 at 7:31 am

    Overall I like the first one better. Here’s why:
    – better looking background (just my opinion)
    – the letters are bold, so it reads more easily
    – I prefer the conversation in the first one. It reads better (again, just my opinion)

    The only thing in the second one that I saw as an improvement was the bubble with the egg -> reptile and ? -> baby. I thought that was really clever.

    The first one is also shorter. I thought the added things in the second one were a bad use of space.

    Hope this helps 🙂

  3. B. Macon 23 Aug 2009 at 7:43 am

    Hmm. Thanks for your feedback.

    By the way, I had a lot of fun making Agent Orange’s new thought-bubble (egg –> alligator and ? –> human).

  4. Bretton 23 Aug 2009 at 8:20 am

    I like the updated version, but a minor flaw with both in my opinion is that it would seem more in-character for Agent Orange to say “with child” and “children” rather than “having a child” and “kids.” It would be a bit more stilted and nonhuman to me. And why does he call himself Agent OJ?

    But great work!

  5. Beccaon 23 Aug 2009 at 7:32 pm

    I enjoy how funny and unassuming the background looks in the updated version… it kills me for some reason.

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