Feb 10 2012

Sparx’ Review Forum

Published by at 2:45 pm under Review Forums

Sparx: “I’m writing an action/comedy about the lives of superheroes not only during their crimefighting gigs, but their hectic and often funny home lives as well.


It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s about a team of young superheroes (around age 20) who live in an apartment complex that houses other superhumans as well (good and bad ones). The main character is the younger brother to the team leader, but doesn’t have superpowers himself. Certain circumstances force the character to live with his brother at the apartment, along with the leader’s zany teamates.


The idea of this story makes one think of it as a mix between “Hey Arnold”, and “Justice Friend” from “Dexter’s Laboratory”. The target audience would be anyone 16 and up. I can add much much more detail about the entirety of this story if you have any questions.”

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4 Responses to “Sparx’ Review Forum”

  1. SilverWolfon 25 Jun 2012 at 4:26 am

    It sounds really interesting, I would love to hear more (hint, hint, poke, poke)…..

  2. fixgooon 18 Aug 2014 at 5:44 am

    bmac please can I take over this thread as it’s not been used for my review forums

  3. B. McKenzieon 19 Aug 2014 at 12:28 am

    Uh, okay, go for it.

  4. fixgooon 19 Aug 2014 at 2:30 am

    Tyler is the favourite grandson of his granddad sir Jameson listening to the old man tell him tales of a hero who fought for freedom etc, his grandfather mysteriously dies and he inherits his grandfather’spot on a group known as the league of asaasins, Tyler joins and has to pass a lot of task and training, in a bid to test his abilities the group sends him on a mission to kill a rogue member, Tyler discovers that the rogue member is Carl their ex-butler who tells him his dad was a legacy superhero the Golden Knight who went undercover to investigate a criminal in the league but was killed before he could complete the mission and that the reason his granddad wanted him to join the league was so that he could receive training to complete the mission, Tyler decides to take up the mantle, fakes Carl’s death and tries to complete the mission while keeping an eye on the league. Am I doing anything wrong and also I would like an idea on the plot the villain who killed his granddad want to complete.

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