Comments on: Page 1 is colored! http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/ How to write a superhero book, comic book or superhero novel and get it published Fri, 10 Feb 2012 13:00:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: B. Mac http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53708 B. Mac Mon, 08 Feb 2010 11:19:32 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53708 I'm still getting used to the blond myself. I'll have to work it out with Emily, but I don't think that the page will be as dark when I send it to publishers. I've prepared some samples below. <br /> <img src="http://www.superheronation.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/AO-resaturation.jpg" alt="" /> <br /> Also, I feel like the page will benefit a lot from being printed full-size rather than shown online in a shrunken form. A comic book page is considerably larger than this website's viewing area. I’m still getting used to the blond myself. I’ll have to work it out with Emily, but I don’t think that the page will be as dark when I send it to publishers. I’ve prepared some samples below.



Also, I feel like the page will benefit a lot from being printed full-size rather than shown online in a shrunken form. A comic book page is considerably larger than this website’s viewing area.

]]> By: Ragged Boy http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53693 Ragged Boy Mon, 08 Feb 2010 02:53:31 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53693 I like it a lot, but I feel like there's an odd darkness to it. Maybe it's my computer, though. The blonde is a change I'm still getting used to, but I can understand the change. Keep it going, man! I like it a lot, but I feel like there’s an odd darkness to it. Maybe it’s my computer, though. The blonde is a change I’m still getting used to, but I can understand the change. Keep it going, man!

]]> By: Lighting Man http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53686 Lighting Man Mon, 08 Feb 2010 00:26:39 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53686 I think it looks the best out of the three coloured versions thus far, very professional. Very impressive and sure to be a hit at all the companies that see it! I think it looks the best out of the three coloured versions thus far, very professional. Very impressive and sure to be a hit at all the companies that see it!

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53685 Anonymous Mon, 08 Feb 2010 00:23:20 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53685 I know you've changed the hair color so it is paler but I think it could use more shading so it looks more texture-y... I know you’ve changed the hair color so it is paler but I think it could use more shading so it looks more texture-y…

]]> By: Lucas Irineu http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53658 Lucas Irineu Sun, 07 Feb 2010 15:41:44 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53658 I like it. Emily did a nice job on the coloring :) I like it. Emily did a nice job on the coloring :)

]]> By: Merides http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53644 Merides Sun, 07 Feb 2010 05:41:24 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53644 Better than the first stab - I hadn't seen the uncolored version until later today. Better than the first stab – I hadn’t seen the uncolored version until later today.

]]> By: B. Mac http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53626 B. Mac Sun, 07 Feb 2010 01:19:33 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53626 Merides, do you mean the first panel is better than it was without the color? Or do you mean it was better than the first stab at this page (where we saw him from a different angle)? <br /> <img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2742/4114966896_d889820f8b_o.jpg" alt="The original version of page 1" /> <br /> I think that the first panel has gotten considerably better, but I don't think Agent Orange turned out as well in the final panel. He's less lively--in the original, his jaw was open wider, which made him look more excited and enthusiastic. In terms of coloring, I don't think he's as vibrant. Merides, do you mean the first panel is better than it was without the color? Or do you mean it was better than the first stab at this page (where we saw him from a different angle)?

The original version of page 1

I think that the first panel has gotten considerably better, but I don’t think Agent Orange turned out as well in the final panel. He’s less lively–in the original, his jaw was open wider, which made him look more excited and enthusiastic. In terms of coloring, I don’t think he’s as vibrant.

]]> By: Merides http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53621 Merides Sun, 07 Feb 2010 00:17:49 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53621 OMG, B.Mac - the first panel looks SO much better... The fact that he's in the first of two rows of chairs makes so much more sense, everything's 200% better! Blonde... eh, I can get used to it. A bit too bright blonde for my tastes, but it's ok. The only thing I see that I'm not too sure about is that the rope AO is on in the last panel looks like a massive sideburn. OMG, B.Mac – the first panel looks SO much better… The fact that he’s in the first of two rows of chairs makes so much more sense, everything’s 200% better! Blonde… eh, I can get used to it. A bit too bright blonde for my tastes, but it’s ok.

The only thing I see that I’m not too sure about is that the rope AO is on in the last panel looks like a massive sideburn.

]]> By: Becca http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53592 Becca Sat, 06 Feb 2010 19:28:18 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53592 I like it very much :) I like it very much :)

]]> By: B. Mac http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53586 B. Mac Sat, 06 Feb 2010 17:37:38 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53586 Yeah, we changed his hair color a bit (mainly so that he looks less like me). Do you like it? Yeah, we changed his hair color a bit (mainly so that he looks less like me). Do you like it?

]]> By: Luna Jamnia http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53585 Luna Jamnia Sat, 06 Feb 2010 17:34:27 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53585 Wait, so now he's blond ... or is that just my computer? Wait, so now he’s blond … or is that just my computer?

]]> By: Rebecca http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53571 Rebecca Sat, 06 Feb 2010 14:37:20 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53571 Brilliant Colouring Job! Brilliant Colouring Job!

]]> By: Contra Glove http://www.superheronation.com/2010/02/06/page-1-is-colored/comment-page-1/#comment-53550 Contra Glove Sat, 06 Feb 2010 09:38:01 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=5486#comment-53550 Seems like an okay coloring job. The "tips" in the book need to curve with the page, though. Seems like an okay coloring job. The “tips” in the book need to curve with the page, though.

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