It’s a very functional summary of the plot, but I think it’d stand out more if it had more style. This is a comedy, right? Could you work some wacky detail into the description?

“a villainous plot shrouded in war and capitalism” is better than something really generic like just “a villainous plot,” but it may help to say more about what’s at stake.

Is it necessary to describe the space pirate as wild? (That strikes me as sort of implied by him being a pirate).

Is it necessary to describe the CEO as greedy? (I can’t remember the last time I encountered a businessman villain that wasn’t greedy).

Lastly, I think there are some places you could maybe shave a few words.
“offers to help” could probably be “helps.” I think it’s more active and a bit shorter.

“the unlikely duo” could probably be shortened to “they.” Based on their description, I think we can infer they’re an unlikely duo.

“escape the fury of a greedy CEO” could be “escape a furious CEO,” but I suspect that replacing furious with something more unexpected would help.

I like this. I still struggle to write my own synopses because I constantly forget what amount of information to include. Thanks!