This is my second review forum, in which I will ask for advice for my as-yet-to-be-named novel, and some other works. All won’t be definite or final, but this is the generalized summary of it:
When the angels that watched over humanity (the Watchers) became corrupted with temptation, the went to human females and raised children with them. These weren’t any ordinary children, these were Nephilim, great warriors and great threats to mankind. Having none of it, God sent down a great flood to weed out and destroy the angel-human hybrids, and simultaneously sealed away the Watchers.
Thousands of years later, a new circle of Watchers are formed, given orders not to intervene in any human affairs, only Observe, Record, and Report what they saw to Heaven’s higher-ups. One day one of the new Watchers, (insert name here) Observes a murder, and racked with pity for the human victim, intervenes, rescuing the human from certain doom (he does it in human form, before the victim sees). The victim turns out to be sixteen-year-old Dulcina, daughter of the city’s most well known preachers, who vanished two weeks prior under mysterious circumstances (or maybe a mysterious falling out with her family) the slain human is a hitman, sent to silence Dulcina for some reason….
How’s it sound? One potential title is Angelhood, or maybe Angelhood Lost.
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