Comments on: Five More Mistakes First-Time Novelists Make (#41-45) http://www.superheronation.com/2008/08/01/five-more-mistakes-of-novel-writers/ How to write a superhero book, comic book or superhero novel and get it published Sun, 12 Feb 2012 08:42:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: B. Mac http://www.superheronation.com/2008/08/01/five-more-mistakes-of-novel-writers/comment-page-1/#comment-36002 B. Mac Thu, 16 Jul 2009 20:41:28 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=970#comment-36002 There are a few phrases that are awkward in fiction even though they are commonly used in real life. For example, "is going to" can almost always be replaced with something like "will." Variations of "get" are not as easy to replace, but I'd recommend trying your best. There are a few phrases that are awkward in fiction even though they are commonly used in real life. For example, “is going to” can almost always be replaced with something like “will.” Variations of “get” are not as easy to replace, but I’d recommend trying your best.

]]> By: Ragged Boy http://www.superheronation.com/2008/08/01/five-more-mistakes-of-novel-writers/comment-page-1/#comment-35986 Ragged Boy Thu, 16 Jul 2009 13:55:21 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=970#comment-35986 "#45 is it okay to use “got” in dialogue?" I think so, it's a fairly common word in speech. “#45 is it okay to use “got” in dialogue?”

I think so, it’s a fairly common word in speech.

]]> By: Liesl http://www.superheronation.com/2008/08/01/five-more-mistakes-of-novel-writers/comment-page-1/#comment-35984 Liesl Thu, 16 Jul 2009 13:46:08 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=970#comment-35984 #45 is it okay to use "got" in dialogue? #45 is it okay to use “got” in dialogue?

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