http://www.superheronation.com/2008/07/03/chapter-mulling/ How to write a superhero book, comic book or superhero novel and get it published Fri, 10 Feb 2012 13:00:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 http://www.superheronation.com/2008/07/03/chapter-mulling/comment-page-1/#comment-59396 B. Mac Tue, 20 Apr 2010 17:34:05 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=892#comment-59396 Thanks, Sam. In the two years since, I adapted this story into a comic book rather than a novel. If you'd like, you can see the first twelve pages <a href=http://www.superheronation.com/2008/01/13/b-macs-review-forum/#comment-58344 rel="nofollow">here</a>. Thanks, Sam. In the two years since, I adapted this story into a comic book rather than a novel. If you’d like, you can see the first twelve pages here.

]]> http://www.superheronation.com/2008/07/03/chapter-mulling/comment-page-1/#comment-59392 Sam Tue, 20 Apr 2010 17:18:34 +0000 http://www.superheronation.com/?p=892#comment-59392 Hey, I liked it, but I think you should pick up some characteristics about the men. You'll find reading that 'the ATF agent' and 'the IRS agent' repeatedly would get rather stale. Instead, pick up on some characteristics within their voices perhaps and describe the way they speak, for instance. "Maybe OSI wouldn't work out for you" said the rasper; this way, you can describe the way they speak and give them some representative character whilst retaining their anonymity . Hey, I liked it, but I think you should pick up some characteristics about the men. You’ll find reading that ‘the ATF agent’ and ‘the IRS agent’ repeatedly would get rather stale. Instead, pick up on some characteristics within their voices perhaps and describe the way they speak, for instance. “Maybe OSI wouldn’t work out for you” said the rasper; this way, you can describe the way they speak and give them some representative character whilst retaining their anonymity .

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