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	<title>Comments on: Writing Action Vs. Writing a Story</title>
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	<description>Writing resources for superhero, fantasy &#38; sci-fi authors</description>
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		<title>By: Cadet Davis</title>
		<link>http://www.superheronation.com/2008/03/02/writing-action-vs-writing-a-story/#comment-2279</link>
		<dc:creator>Cadet Davis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Apr 2008 17:23:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>20 pages is pretty long and probably redundant.  I usually get bored with fights that go beyond 3 pages.  Then again, my attention span is short.  If you're writing for an adult audience, you could probably go up to maybe 5-7 pages, but I think that's pushing it.  That's 1500-2000 words.  How many punches and kicks do you have to describe?  </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>20 pages is pretty long and probably redundant.  I usually get bored with fights that go beyond 3 pages.  Then again, my attention span is short.  If you&#8217;re writing for an adult audience, you could probably go up to maybe 5-7 pages, but I think that&#8217;s pushing it.  That&#8217;s 1500-2000 words.  How many punches and kicks do you have to describe?</p>
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		<title>By: chulance</title>
		<link>http://www.superheronation.com/2008/03/02/writing-action-vs-writing-a-story/#comment-2275</link>
		<dc:creator>chulance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Apr 2008 14:57:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My fight scenes are about 20 pages long.  Is that good?  </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My fight scenes are about 20 pages long.  Is that good?</p>
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